Today’s posting is a ink sketch of a feathered dahlia from my mother in law’s garden, with a watercolor wash on the top. It’s a small little piece, just 3″ x 5″ but fun to do.
A good friend suggested to me that the top right green patch on my mountains yesterday caught her eye too much, she wondered if it was a meadow. Good catch Diane! I think its value was too bright and it drew your eye up and out of the picture plane…and we do NOT want that!! Big smile. So I toned it down with a light wash of permanent rose to gray it down (red and green are complementary and neutralize each other) and added a touch of blue at the bottom for shading. I think it’s better now.
I have to say that plein air painting in our 20% humidity with a wind was a challenge yesterday. the paint dries almost before it hits the paper — ok, a slight exaggeration — but it’s a lot different than how quickly it dries in the studio.
So below is how it was yesterday. Do you think the change helped?
Beautiful Rachel. I’m partial to desert landscapes… I live in Las Vegas NV.
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Thanks Sharon. So you know what I’m talking about! the desert is so beautiful…
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You have such a great touch. That knocked it back just enough. It’s even more wonderful.
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Thank you! I’m very glad for your honest criticism. Really helpful!
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Your Dahlia is really pretty! My neighbor behind me grows them and I have been meaning to ask her if I could take a photo so I could paint them. You inspired me to do so! And I like the change you made to your desert scene. The colors are so beautiful! I really struggle with watercolor but you make it look easy! Good work Rachel! 🙂
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Thank you Jill. I’m feeling like nothing I paint today is working out (except the dahlia) so thanks for your kind words…
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You should definitely paint them!!
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Sweet dahlia Rachel and I do like the change you made. Good call on that!
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Thanks Jodi.
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I really think I like the ink sketch with the wash…. but then again I think I like all watercolor…. and didn’t realize the complexity… until you started sharing some of the details.
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Thanks Beth. I am glad my explanations are clear and useful! I like ink and wash too.
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Good change and beautiful, both of them!
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Thanks!
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Beautiful work!! And I agree with the change, as it’s more balanced now, but really…you’re just awesome and everything looks wonderful! ❤️😃
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ah, shucks Charlie. Thanks. I’m glad you like the change.
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