Here’s the second try on this painting. I like it better, but am still not totally happy with it. It’s in progress and I’m setting it aside to consider it another day. You can compare it with the earlier version . I’m very thankful for constructive criticism and comments that you all have taken the time to write, and would love to hear your comments on this one.
One thing that has to be fixed in the next version is the branch going out the corner of the piece! I certainly know that but had a brain hiccup there. I’m thinking the white top in the far left rock is too deep. I’m sure I’ll come up with other issues as I look at it more.
I’m happy with the mixing of the foliage colors on the paper. I think that’s fresh. I like the sun hitting the branches and that they are largely better shaped (wide near the trunk and getting more slender.)
I’ve “fallen off the wagon” in the 30 in 30 challenge, at least in posting on my blog. Life with teens is getting in the way! those of you who are parents can probably relate. But that’s ok, painting can wait.
Thanks for stopping by…
I like this one better, and not sure exactly why, Rachel. I sure understand about life with teens! Was wondering where you were. Glad you’re still painting. Rock on!
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Thx Laura!
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The prickly pear is just wonderfully colored and the shade on the stones around the spot of sunlight is compelling my eye to linger on the stone bench. The tree trunk looks flatter in this one, but that doesn’t bother me with tall the emphasis on the bench. Your work just gets better and better.
Diane
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Diane thanks! I could and should round the trunk more. I played with matting and cropping and could make it work without taking the branch out the corner. I used the same colors to create foliage and the prickly pear so it has color unity. Thx!
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I like the light on the path ~ try to carve out more painting time for you, I think it helps make us better at everything else in life too!
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Cynthia, you are absolutely right! I was painting, or reading about painting, I just couldn’t get anything worth sharing…
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I like the leaves in front of the trunk. I can see the improvements now that you have mentioned them. Lovely work 🙂
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Thanks Sheila, I saw the leaves in the photo and thought, why not give it a try?
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I like your progress Rachel, you will get to the place you want to be. I understand about teens. 😍☕️
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Thank you Sharon. Thanks for the parenting support!
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I love the way the sun shines on the stones. This is great!
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Thank you Catherine. Appreciate it!
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Rachel,
Much, much better! I really has a liveliness now.
Barbara McGuire MD FACP MMM bmcguire@swcp.com 505-235-1375 http://www.apexvisualart.com
Let the beauty we love be what we do. ~ Rumi
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Wow! Thanks Barbara!
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I really like the light in this one. (K)
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Thanks Kerfe!
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This is really beautiful, LOVE the light in it (bench, ground, branches)! The stones on the ground are great too! I still would suggest maybe coloured pencil for details (I love CP together with watercolours) – but that´s a matter of taste and depends on what medium you choose. As a pure watercolour painting it´s wonderful as it is!
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Thanks so much Ann Christina. I haven’t tried CP with WC yet…perhaps sometime soon!
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The colour of the sunlight looks much more natural in the second version, and the tree trunk and branches are more realistic. Gorgeous greens ranging from golden to olive to teal!
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Thank you so much! Really appreciate you commenting
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