Ok folks, I’ve taken my time with this one and I’m pretty happy with it. I thought it was almost done, and it is, but as is quite usual, I see problems once I’ve taken a picture AND uploaded it! LOL. It’s the uploading that makes the problems pop out.
I see that there’s a leaf hiding behind the right cluster that should be greener, and the edge of the out of focus area above that blossom bothers me. it’s too hard an edge. And now I think I like the one without as much of the defining better. What’a gal to do with that, but just paint another? It would be different and looser.
Initially I thought that more color was needed at the top, but I’m thinking now, it’s light and airy and a good contrast to the leaves and stems below…
What do you think? I would love to hear from you, especially if you see things that bother you or have suggestions to make it better.